Successions
I have constructed a completed music video with the continuity edits I desired, as well as exploring various ways in which edits can be formed towards different meanings. I also managed to manage my time quite well to get the filming done, visiting a few local locations which suited the needs of the filming. I also made use of my camera and the various mounts, and although some clips had to be forgotten due to impracticality and general overall change of the style trying to be captured. I also managed to get a few really nice shots while on my bike, which featured continuity and purpose for time passing, as well as showing a range of camera placements within the restriction of first person view.
Unsuccessful Parts
There were a few setbacks, mainly with editing, whereby menial tasks were undertaken editing-wise which ended up too scruffy or ill fitting, such as the text appearing from the phone. This shot was simply too randomly placed wherever I tried to slot it, and so wasn't very practical towards the continuity of it all, though would provide solidarity and clarity towards the narrative. There was also an issue that I knew would occur, whereby the lighting and quality was affected, for instance a lot of indoor lights giving of a golden hue that 'damaged' the shot and didn't suffice to illuminate certain features, as well as reducing the sharpness. However, despite camera shakiness, pixellation, lighting and shot type restriction, this was in some ways a desired effect, and was expected from a first person camera, as well as budget being a factor that would affect the quality. Shakiness was obviously a feature that would be present with such a style of editing, though also adds the desired sense of realism, as a HD quality video with perfect angles and movement (as if on tracks) involving panning and zooming would not be realistic, though a video with shakiness, movement, no zooming or panning is realistic. Also, I had a slight fall out with one of the desired actors, and so only featured one other character besides myself, though this only affected one plot point and would have taken up a lot of screen time to stay appropriately relevant.
Amendments to be made
The only things that I will have to do, judging by feedback as well as my own analysis, will be to add a small finishing shot on the end to summarise the end result of the story, possibly some calendars being flipped to show time passing with relevance to the ending to let the plot points form an explanation in the viewer's head. I also need to refilm one segment (after he falls over) where not a lot happens and the editing is quite forced, it is unfitting and somewhat time wasting and so will be refilmed and reconsidered. I will also refilm the opening shots, as they're considerably lower quality than intended, as well as not being first person, though I don't mind this in the opening as much, as continuity is only important in this aspect once the POV filming starts.